Awkward Garrus is my favourite Garrus, and you captured him really well in this. I'd really like to see you continue this and talk about what happens next.

This was fantastic. It feels real, what with the constant tangents he goes on (especially in the last part!) but it's not hard to read at the same time and the story keeps it's coherency. Now if only we knew if Shepard completed the romance... )

Great job on this! You really got into Garrus' head. I can easily imagine him acting/thinking those exact same things right before his 'date' with Shepard. I especially loved his conversation with Zaeed! :D

Loved the dialogue with dr. Chakwas. Good job! :)