Thank you for this story ! ! ! !

Cool story

Wonderful story one of the best au that I have read. Anna

Thanks for writing I enjoyed the story a lot.

nice

What a pity no one could have intervened in time to help Snape as a child...but it's nice to see it happen whenever it does.

That sounds like an awesome future that someone needs to write! Thanks for sharing.

Please do eventually write a sequel. I would love to find out what happens on the new magical planet.

This fic is truly disgusting. Harry, Neville, and Voldemort becoming immortal and becoming kings of the wizarding world? The breeding of Muggleborn children out of the population? This is supposed to be a HAPPY ending?

Death-Eater-apologist fics always make me angry, because they try to justify racism and genocide, but yours might be the worst I've ever read. I don't think I've ever read a fic by an author who was so blatant about it. How could you read the books and not understand that Voldemort's quest for immortality was a BAD thing? How could you possibly not see that Voldemort was an obvious parallel to Adolf Hitler? How could you ever think that a dictatorship under the wizarding equivalent of ADOLF FUCKING HITLER would be better for the wizarding world than the fate Rowling imagined for it?

"The Magical world reached a Utopia; where there was no murder or horror or evil."

*bursts out laughing* Oh, wow. Please tell me this fic is actually a parody. Yeah, in a world ruled by Wizarding Hitler, there would be no murder or horror or evil...except for those pesky Muggleborns and Muggles, but they're inferior to purebloods anyway, so who cares about them?

And seriously? That sentence I quoted just now? It reads exactly like a line from a dystopic novel, like a catchphrase the oppressive government would use to justify their crimes against humanity. Though considering who the wizarding world's new dictator...oh, sorry; "king"...is, it seems fitting.

And you support this. You think this is a happy ending for the wizarding world. You think that being under the control of a psychopathic tyrant-THREE psychopathic tyrants, I should say-with the power of life and death over the population, who advocate segregation, who exterminate an entire group of people, is a more satisfying ending than Rowling's ending.

I can think of three possibilities: 1. You're a troll and this is a brilliant parody of Voldemort-apologist fics. 2. You somehow missed the obvious parallel between the Death Eaters and the Nazis. 3. You're actually a supporter of racism and genocide in real life.

If the first is true, then well done. You got at least one of your readers riled up and earned a nice long flame for your trouble, the goal of trolls everywhere. If the second is true, you must have never taken global or European history, because the Voldemort-Hitler comparisons were so blatantly obvious a third grader could have picked up on them. If the third is true, well...you're a sick person, and I weep for the future of this country.

Well . . . I certainly enjoyed this. Really can't say much other than that because I don't find anything "wrong" or to anything to critic about this fic. Really.

This was epic! Brilliantly done!

I love all of the twists you put in :)

Love it!

WOW just Wow!
That was amzing!
There were soo many plot points that could be taken individually and made into a full story. Kudos, applauds, and a whole jar of virtual cookies for you!

I love this story, though it kinda feels more like a very long very detailed story summary. I would love to see more day to day intereactions between the characters. It would have been awesome to read the conversations and reactions to everything that was happening. But anyway... Good job!

So ingenious! Definitely an original take on many fanfiction cliches and so tastefully done. One of my all time favorite fics on the site.