Reviews for The Legend of Korra: Expecting the Unexpected P 2
No Fate 1990 chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
This story was amazing
cindy chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
that's very AMAZING STORY you are a awesome writer ,and also good story best ONE I READ SO FAAR.!WRITE MORE PLEASE!11
Soul-Blind chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
im glad her baby made it.
Vitani12 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
YEEEY THE BABY LIVED!
Randie chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
OMG WRITE A NEW ONE QUICK!
Rose chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
OMG i love this!
xanimejunkie chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Oh crap... Freaking scared me.
BG-13 chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Eh. Not as bad as you led me to believe...

I was thinking. Since you've been such a help to me with my story, maybe I could be of assistance with yours...? I'm not sure how much help I'd really be but I could at least do some revisions, make the sentences smoother...or you know something...