sorry, but... YOU SPELLED DUCKY'S LAST NAME WRONG! IT IS MALLARD, NOT MALLORD!

Ok. Now that my rant is over, nicely done.

I hope this is like thi on the show.

The end of the episode was certainly a cliffie! I can't believe how they left it. I like how you continued the next few minutes :)

As long as Ducky lives!

But good job! It had no mistakes that I noticed...

This is exactly how I pictured Ducky being saved...great job..had tears in my eyes!

Powerfully written. For your first NCIS fanfic, you've done an excellent job with characterizations.

One small nitpick: Ducky's last name is spelled 'Mallard' (like the bird) not 'Mallord'.

Very good! Keep going... Maybe do a POV chapter for eveyone involved... One thgs for sure... If anything happens to any of Gibbs "kids" especially abby, he will hunt Harper Deering down and kill him with his bare hands!

Good! You should keep going with your opinion!

Last 2 minutes, for real! I cried. In all honesty, I think Gibbs, Vance, and Abby are fine. Ducky's fine because he's signed on for next season. Tony and Ziva were dumb for taking the elevator-during a BOMB THREAT- but I guess they're planning something. I don't think they'll die, because they're the show, but who knows. McGee is probably dead. I don't want him to die, but with their track-record of death, no one on the TEAM has died since Shepard. Yeah, Mike did, but he was family, not every-episode investigator. Plus, Dorneget is in line, and Sean Murray has unsettling Tweets. But who knows. NCIS are con-experts and Trolls.

All of them.

AHHHHH! Please continue this as soon as you can! The only thought that could alleviate my mind from the season finale depression was "TO THE FANFICTION" so please continue this daily if possible! Beautiful description and everyone's in character. Well done!

I like it! I know that Ducky lives because David McCallum signed on for two more seasons. I don't think anyone died in the explosion except Cole. I think Dearing was the one who called Ducky. I bawled so hard at the ending :(

Good story though!

AGGGGGGGGGGGGH! I love it- this is what I pictured happening for the premiere next season :) Well played!

This is a great story. I was soooooooooo upset over the ending. Oh my gosh! Who dies? Who's hurt? Does Ducky live? What about Gibbs and Abby, who were right next to the bomb in her lab? What about Ziva & Tony in the elevator? Why did they take the elevator instead of the stairs? What about McGee in the bullpen? Where was Vance? Did he make it out of the building? And the most important question of all - WHAT IN THE WORLD WAS NCIS THINKING TO POTENTIALLY KILL OFF MAIN CHARACTERS OF THE #1 HIT SHOW? ARE THEY INSANE?

Loved your story! Sorry about that, just had to vent! LOL! Also, I just wanted to let you know that Ducky's name is Dr. Mallard, like the duck. Thanks!

well done, I watched the episode glued to the tv. Can't wait for seson 10 and season 9 just ended. What cliff hanger they left us with.

This was so good! I hope your right and Jimmy finds Ducky in time. Oh god...I'm so scared right now! I cried because I thought it was Ducky, but now I dont know! I'm really worried about McGee and Ducky...

I hope I'm wrong!