Update soon!

I'm glad you decided to continue the story even though you have to rewrite alot of it I'm enjoying it and was really happy to see there was a new chapter.

Crying tears of happiness that you update so Awesome

uppdate

You should pair Naruto With Riza Hawkeye

Naruto did some great things is he still alive?

Looking forward to the next chapter

it look nice would be intersting if you continue it :D

What if the Golden alchemist was dating the Ice Queen of the Briggs fortress Oliver Mila Armstrong that would be pretty cool. Brillient story but did you really have to kill Naruto it's sad when people die.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Black Rose

AWESOME! I really like this story; and to be honest I'm actually writing one about Naruto being their pseudo little brother, but so far... I have nothing on you... T_T

I got to say... Naruto's death is a tiny bit anti-climatic, but once you get past that, it'sreally a good story/idea.

HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!

so from the chapter i can tell that you are going to be using the first story as a base, i think this is a very good story. i love the concept of naruto being the fallen hero older brother or thoose to. its something that i've never come across before and i'm so intriged i just can't wait for the next chapter! although i can say that you should look into using the second seris as a base as its longer and has a far better plot. well any way please update again soon!

Naruto being the right hand man of Bradly and being the oldest sibling this is definitely a unique idea hope their will be more soon.

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I really can't wait to see how this story turns out. I mean it looks truly interesting although I hope it does deviate from canon alot... So far it seems like it's a 'follow the manga with a twist' type story and I don't think that would show this fic its full potential... Anyways it's your story... Also I hope there will be other characters from Naruto in this... or at least Naruto coming back to life.

Please UPdate soon!