Thank god you're dropping the ridiculous name to something reasonable. I wouldn't have bothered with the next chapter if I didn't know.

im concerned

That was awesome! I can't wait for the sequel and I was wondering is this following the universe of 'My heart would know.' I'm just wondering and if it is I can't wait for McQueen to find out that Doc's his dad. I can't wait.

I know I usually don't review a story until the very end. I've got something really important to tell you...well, first reading about cars 2 on wikipedia is one thing, but watching the movie is a whole new ball game, okay.

Oh Naty, this was such a powerful ending! You wrapped it up beautifully! I think you did an excellent job on the descriptions - I got a great visual of the whole chapter, especially with all the dialogue. I'm now a full believer in happy ending stories. Like I've always said, you provide such a depth to your characters and plot. You truly have a passion for what you're writing and it shows.

Congratulations on finishing your story; I know it must have meant a lot to you to complete it. :)

Kelsey

I really love this, sweetie. I think I'll have to finish for today. I have other things to do, and I have to review some of Mere's stories as well. Can't neglect my other responsibilities, but I promise I will return to finish this story soon. Love you.

Happy 100th review, sweetheart! *kiss*

Wow. Darkov is kind of… sassy and snarky. I didn't expect that from a villain as dark as he is. Very creative.

Hi! Sorry, I left for a couple of hours because I had to watch the last three episodes of MLP with my little sister. Back now. :)

Yikes. Poor Sky got in a physical fight with a car, huh? Yeah, humans don't usually win those confrontations… so sad.

Yay! Sky's back!

And… yay! Darkov! I mean, that's bad, but as far as the story becoming awesome, YAY!

A squirrel?! XD

Wow, short chapter. Guess I'll have to continue…

Aww. :') It's like… like the light brought her back… but not all the way. Oh, that was a great moment. I hope things get better soon.

Hmm. This is a bit confusing, how Doc is alive but everyone THOUGHT he was dead, and how he was involved in the spy story… I think I understand, I guess I'll have to read further to make sure I really get it.

What's Doc reading everyone's journal for? That's not cool. XD

Ohhh… they've had Sky the whole time… oh my. That's good, I guess, but she's still in a coma… I'm really nervous, let me continue.

Tee hee! Did you write that Mater song yourself? That's so cute.

Hi honey. I'm back! I reread the previous chapters in case I'd forgotten anything. Ah, I see from the prologue that you really did eliminate all of the Kingdom Hearts content. All right, I guess you thought that was best.

Okay, five-year time skip to post-Cars 2. Really interesting choice, there. Great Mater and McQueen moments, and very intriguing bit of McQueen deciding to visit the forest that really got me pumped up for the next scene…

Which was really scary! O.O Car corpses everywhere. That's not something you often see…

Um, you seem to have left some notes about how to write the chapter IN the chapter. Might want to edit that, sweetie. :D But this is great work. So sad to think of having lost a friend for five whole years…

SQUEEEEEEEEE FINALLY A HAPPY ENDING! :D

It is awesome i loved it! :D