Aww what a quirky couple! And I love that Luna asked him to dinner as payment for the puppy :D

Haha this was great! Well done! :)

Charlie/Luna is such a great pairing! The beginning/set-up felt a little rushed to me, but I really liked the scene with Charlie in Luna's shop. Your monkey line was the most convincing I've read so far, too! :)

That was funny. Well written too; I can u would be able to have a hard time incorporating that quote into the fic - I have seen a few other (less... Smooth) attempts.

I can imagine Luna sayin something like that. :)

haha, really good :)