5 satrs dude 5 stars great story

Oh Optimus . . . this is so dark, & sad! T0T

That was so sad. But I loved it! I'm a horrible person...but you have amazing writing! I feel so bad now...I seriously thought that little girl was going to survive somehow! But no...her teddy did...

I'm going to go crawl in a hole and cry my eyeballs out now...

Beautiful.

Very touching story well done good work.

The only thing I could think of while reading this story was, that little girl probably would have wished she stayed asleep. That was, well, something, but realistic in that universe. Very well written, I'll say that. Will there be more?

Such a sad little ficlet. But so perfectly written, I love it! :D

Sad and touching.

This is a well written piece that I could easily see happening in the show if the writers were willing to get that dark.

Looking forward to more.

Very sad but very well written. :(