aww - beautiful! They seem peaceful together.

Aww. That was absolutely beautiful! :D I loved the relationship between Al&Teddy, it was adorable, and sweet, and just asgjkhdd amazing. I love your freeverse style. Great job! ;D

Aww, how sweet! You write freeverse really well - well, you're just a wonderful writer overall, I'd say - and I really love this. It's sweet how Al loves Teddy's voice, and again the little mention of Alabaster is really cute, a nice throwback to the fic where he was first nicknamed. I love your formatting here, as well, and I think the more simple style definitely works for the tone of this particular freeverse. This is really sweet and romantic, and you've captured their relationship and Al's feelings very nicely. Awesome, mew!