great story dude

you MUST to do "gunbladeshipping"

Glad that you saw this through the end. It always bothers me when people don't finish what they start, glad that I was able to help motivate you to finish it.

The last chapter was rather short, but entertaining to read. The ending seems like you can do a possible sequel about Squalls and Lightnings journey to get each other back. I personally would like to see the hardships they go through so that they could reunite. In the end though it's about what you want to do.

Not good with words, but good luck and have fun on your future endeavors! Hope you write more!

P.S. Kinda hope you do more Squall and Lightning or what you liked to call it "gunbladeshipping" (I hope I used that term right and if not then SHIT!).

Bartz is doomed.

Just have to say that I LOVE your Garland! I also love the way you write. The description is clear and concise, no fancy words that weight your writing down, and it flows amazingly well. I'm going to admit here that I really don't like Lightning or Squall, probably because they're so similar, but I can see that they would fit well and from the way it's playing out it seems they will fit well!

Also, even the 'soppy' moments such as Squall giving Lightning his jacket, you've made it seem natural (albeit surly :P) but not forced and not overly gushy. I really like this. :)

Good chapter short, but I'm not complaining. Keep up the good work!

Good chapter excited to see what will happen next keep it up!

nice! really having fun to read your story ...really really really amazingly fun ... keep this update, love it so much!

The story just gets more and more interesting.

YEAH! ... haha limping ultimecia is a dead meat in the of cloud of darkness hand, bad girl is always be a bad lol

you have to know that i'm just kidding when i said that i hate you, right :) this chp is absolutely awesome, Awesome, AWESOME!

keep it up, nice story

i've read this already review but idk why yhe heck my review not coming out to view but this story is crazily awesome.. keep update

so damn good executed, wonderfully amazing lol thanks

Good chapter very detailed battle compared to your other ones. Keep up the good work

hooo noooooo...light!... that so devastating, she can't be dead that easily, she can't return home yet! she can't! that's all squall fault for being fool, why can't he protect her? why he have to stay away from her? so coward!

*uh i'm talking to squall lol