I wonder if Doumeki's power grew along with Watanuki? Nice one, though I am curious about the others too.

Oh my god... This is masterpiece. Thank you for writing this..
You success make my heart flip flop.
I like the way they live happy ever after.

Thank you. :)

Shooooo sweetttt! Ohmygoshh! I really loved that lemon scene ** so hot! Thanks for writing such an amazing fanfic!

whole deep love transcends all time and other realms they say.

Thank you for writing this great story

Just finished reading it and the only thing I can think since half-way through the story is how damn perfect and flawless this is. One of the greatest things I have ever read. Do I need to say you have done an excellent job? Well this is more than amazing. Bravo .
I love it.

The writing is very consistent in this story and I like the concept of the plot. It is interesting that you chose to write this from Doumeki's point of view. I also enjoyed the emotions you put in Doumeki's thought process, especially since he is a very quiet and private person who is hard to read and whose emotions are normally locked up. The lemon was very sensual and sophisticated. It was a novel scene and I was thoroughly impressed. It was like a yaoi version of one of the raunchier Harlequin romances. It really made me happy. _ "Pounded into the wild abandon", that was an awesome line! I love that you went into hard yaoi mode because the lemon was amazing! This was really cute, thanks for sharing! _

You made me HAPPY, you did what the ladies of clamp didn't ...made me smile ...thank you

I like it! **

TT-TT I can die a happy fangirl
TTTT

Awww ain't love beautiful? Well I think so. I think that love should be sweet and tender. Don't forget passionate. I love the fact that Doumeki chose to wait for a physical gesture of affection before he made a move on Watanuki. I also love that Doumeki chose that moment to use the egg to make his wish. That speaks to how much he loved Watanuki. I hope you make more stories like this one.

I thought it was cute. :3

Best story ever loved it i dont know why but most of the storys i read are boyxboyso ya.

OMG i love it!

i always wanted shizuka to live eternally with watanuki, thanx so much!

you should make a sequel one were someone else likes watanuki and tries to steal him for himself, that would be sooo cool!

awwwwwwwww I really loved this fanfic! it's cute and loving! :)