Love this story it's really great! I hope you continue with it and the plot is really cool along with the use of magic throughout!

Interesting

Please tell me you have plans of continuing this story.

This is so cute! Freed is our lovable little dork!

Omfg super good
Better post da new chappy soon!
I'm gonna be waiting

Love how Mirajane is reluctant, in all the other stories she's not.

You should probably change the word "raped" for "wrapped" because when Freed "wraps his arms around Mira" I don't think he's raping her...right? he's not right?

Just thought you should know.

Plz continue

Hell yeah! The type of fanfic I've been looking for! xD

Interesting. I like it.

This was an amazing chapter but one thing ruined it for me. When Freed and Mira are kissing on the porch, you may want to correct "raped" to "wrapped", unless what you really meant was that he managed to rape her right then.

Shey sweetheart thanks for continuing this story! There's really very little fried fanficts around and yours is by far the best(: they are so cute together! I hope you will continue writing(: can you maybe add a bit of action to their romance as well? I love the part where fried used his runes to play hide and seek with Mira. Please update soon I'll be waiting(:

I like it, but I wish there was more lemons like Mira. craved him unexpectedly. I hope there is another chapter. :D

As I remember it now it was a combination of the last chapter and the fact that you hadn't updated for a long time. It kind of made it seem like you had lost interest, which you kind of had as it seems now? xD I guess I felt that it was kind of how it would have gone for me if I lost interest in a story. But now there's no problem, since you're back :D And I still love the story and the idea as a whole

1 i hope you update soon
2 freed is such a gentleman XD