Oh this is cute!

So adorably sweet!

Lovely :)

Yay!

Once again, the emotion you put into this was amazing. I love how you write Bruce and the Hulk. I've always seen them as alternate sides, but this new way that you write it...almost makes sense. I love this story too. 3

This is so meagninful... "Hulk made Bruce scared and alone."
And yes! "I know you're not a medical doctor. You're a physicist but…" Bruce is a nuclear physicist! He acted as an unregistered physician in Calcutta, helping people ! :)

But, movieverse, Steve Rogers was born in July 4th, 1918, plane crash 1945. So he'd be 26/27 years old. ;)

And this is perfect! "The warmth from his 21st century family healed him more than the serum or any medicine ever could."

Keep writing!

Lovely! I want to see this portrait! :)

It's all very good. Tony confronting Fury to protect Steve, acting as the patriarch, older, wiser when it means to deal with politics and government agencies, etc. With power and money to keep his friends conformable and safe.

Bruce and Hulk in peace is perfect.

And this is the real Steve. "The way I treated Tony suggests otherwise. A good person does not say what I did on the helicarrier."

But, still, the truth is that everything Steve said was rude but true : based in the past, on Tony's file that SHIELD give Steve to read. The way Tony used to be.
On contrary, Steve's file must contain Dr. Erskine's note about how special he was before the serum, and that's way he was chosen...
And that's way Tony must apologize... ;)

Lovely!

But Tony has to apologize to Steve, right?
This Tony, the real Tony, the one who is funny, annoying, and arrogant sometimes, but most of all lovely and human and with a huge sense of justice. He said "You're a laboratory experiment, Rogers. Everything special about you came out of a bottle." And that's not true at all. And much worse than everything that Steve said to him. This real Tony, I'm sure, apologize as well! :)

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Don't mind me as I squee at the family lovin'. Wonderful job...If I had to say one thing constructive however, let it be this; first off, it didn't hurt this story, but transitioning from one chapter to the next might need some work (I have the same problem half the time myself) or at least give some moments leading into and explaining what happened. I just was perturbed how one moment of family goodness led Steve smashed into a wall. Other than that, I liked how they still sounded like themselves, and it wasn't too gushy (you had a moment there in the first chapter). I commend you on excellent writing :)

You have a wonderful description and vocab but I can't imagine Tony like this... Good job though.

Love Avengers family stories - so perfect, and exactly what you want to see. Thanks for an excellent one:)

This is the first Avengers fanfiction I read, and sucked me in... Well both of us really... It's so full of FEELING! Dreamer over here is dying for more;) and it has me sqweeling like the crazed fangirl I am)
Dreamer and Marsh