| Reviews for Edge of Desire |
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  Sara chapter 1 . 1/27/2013 The ideas are nice, but the pov ruined it. Also, the events passed by too fast and there were no details of each. You could've easilly written more chapters. I wish it were a happy ending. |
| Fan chapter 1 . 8/12/2012 As much as I hate to say it, the Quinn in this story deserves no sympathy. Leaving someone AT THE ALTER is stupid. There is more than one reason why there is such a long period of time between the proposal and the wedding and not all of it has to do with Wedding invitations, ect. |
| Laiz chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 Omg. THE BEST story I think I've ever read. Left me in tears. Seriously I cried for 5 minutes after reading this. So well written. Absolutley amazing. |
 faberryluving chapter 1 . 6/16/2012 yeah, if I was Quinn I would've killed myself after the anniversary. |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/13/2012 You just broke my heart. /3 |
| alexa chapter 1 . 5/31/2012 very touching. almost cried in the middle of it. hope there's a sequel. |
| CreativeWr1ter chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 YOU MUST FIX THIS. *evil glare* manly tears here, I regret nothing |
| Cassicio chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 I KNEW IT WAS SHARMEN STYLE! Gahhhh! Way to rebreak my heart over that and mixing Faberry with it! *headdesk* This is amazing, and absolutely tear jerking. |
| SeraphimPyro chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 I really enjoyed reading it and it broke my heart at how sad it was, you really captured their emotions |
| MrRyAmbrose chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 That is by far the most heartbreaking story I've ever read. However it is beautifully written. But I do believe we need a sequel for a happy ending :( |
| canttouchthis88 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012 Awww:( Great job! |
| dyingonmyknees chapter 1 . 5/22/2012 Amazing short story. All of the characters are in character and the Faberry romance is super freaking duper cute :3 Sad ending, but that's how life is unfortunately, I know :( The only criticism I can think of (besides a few spelling mistakes, but that's bound to happen since we're human) is the point of view. I can understand since we the reader is supposed to read in "Quinn's" view, but switching from "you" to "I" at a few points is a bit confusing. But that's only a tiny flaw since we all know who "I" is supposed to be. Okay, I'm off to read the rest of your stories. Keep up the amazing work! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2012 BUT! Rachel & Quinn need to be together! You cant do that! Ahahahaha ok no, but still that hurts. A sequel with happy ending to faberry please? Sorry for my bad english :P |
