Amazing story and writing, I've just read it all from start to finish.
It's been a long time since I've seen a story so we'll written.
I very much hope this will be updated sometime in the future.

took me till the tree scene to realize he reminded me of Uncle from jackie chan adventures

I actually hate you for not updating this wonderful story in four
FUCKING
YEARS

my english teacher had this on the projecter in class this morning mr denlinger wtf

Why is it that no author actually manages to come up with good excuses for why everyone responsible for naruto's well-being abandoned him? Your excuses suck too.

Great story! I can only hope that you will come back to this story one day and finish it! I'm exceptionally curious to know what's going to happen next and just where the true Hokage-sama is...

Didn't Tabibito's initial description include a tanto?

PleasePLEASE update?

And this right here is when the story became too fucking stupid to keep reading. So good job for that. Takes a certain amount of skill to pull that off.

...Please, please, PLEASE tell me that this is still being updated, and that one is on its way.

10/10 for the story, 0/10 for you for making me wait for another chapter after having marathoned this.

Meanie. :P

Nice! I hope you don't abandon this fic because it would be a tragedy. I really enjoyed the suspense and the drama. Can't wait for the next part!

It has been a while since I read your story but I never reviewed it. I thought you abandoned it, but as I checked your profile today, I know you are return, so my review would not be left unviewed.

Just to say I really liked every chapters you wrote, especially the one where the Kyuubi's chakra corroded Tabibito's arm. I think it was really well rendered. Full of ideas, I like also the little tavern/world you built, and I also like your interpretation of Hiruzen.

I wish you to keep up the good work and a successful student's life,

With all my regards,

Mugu

The bamboo and water torture isn't real as bamboo doesn't get any sunlight when they get inside someone and they stop growing (it was tested by the Mythbusters, it was on tape with a control bamboo for comparison which is 8 feet high by the end of the month long experiment, so death by dehydration before impalement) and while water can erode rock it wouldn't if the rock can grow back like a living thing faster than water erosion and cuts heal after 5 days and that is if the water is clean, which I think would have been a waste of their clean water with being surrounded by oceans, so salt water with a lot of germs would get infected and die of infection. Also tested by Mythbusters but on the forehead with a drip every 5 seconds and for safety reasons was stopped so I don't know if that could have happened but a guy with a hole in his hand would bleed out first.

But the Hyuga doesn't know that so Ibiki could have lied about that, if I didn't watch Mythbusters and know science that even I would have believed it (you can make Ibiki really unsettling with his dialogue). Other than that ninja and stealth missions is what ninjas are supposed to do so, its a good story, keep up the good work and I also read Inspector Zuko and the Assassin's Creed story too and waiting for the next update, good luck :)

A great story.

As always your fanfiction's are masterful and quite thorough. I hope you continue writing this one as it was quite enjoyable to read. It's a breath of fresh air in a fucking cow pen.