This is fantastic! Your writing is eloquent, the situation is plausible, and Mako's characterization is fascinating as he retains these memories and tries to interpret them. I love the last line-it has something fear, ambivalence, and hope. Great job on this!

omg this is amazing! I will cry if this turns out to be true! :0 I don't think it is though, because I know the boys' parents loved them...gonna cry now anyway! Ahhh...my feels!
I do not understand how this has only ONE reveiw when it is amazing! Ugh, insane!
This was greatly written and a very clever idea! Way to go! :)

Ooh, excellent twist! I hadn't thought of that scenario...but it certainly makes for an interesting plot. I enjoyed the comparison of his life to a tapestry-really beautiful.