Reviews for Emmetts Last Breath |
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![]() ![]() this is so good so far im just reading it now |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good so far keep updating, also add more detailing and don't go to fast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! btw, what year is this? In the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey hey hey! Yep it's me! Love this chapter! And Emmy bear -smiles and drools slightly- |
![]() ![]() Keep the story going!:) |
![]() ![]() Did you mean Frère Jacques instead of fara jaca? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought I reveiwd the last chapter... Thic chapter was kind of funny, definatly had it's chuckle moments |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter! Even though it is quite short (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can i be your beta i have to much free time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. I love Emmett's immaturity! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! can't wait for another chapter :) i like your name lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think u did a good job... But I wouldn't know because I'm a virgin |
![]() ![]() ![]() seemed good to me but i'm in the same boat as you. please update again soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! You did a great job :D Update soon! |