I'm like Oliver now...more please...good story, could go so many ways

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I've read this one before, and I thought I'd read it again, you're a great writer, please write more Flashpoint stories!

Nice and short with a good Sam whumping. Samtastic.

Prey -
a: an animal taken by a predator as food

b: one that is helpless or unable to resist attack : victim was prey to his own appetites

Pray -

Entreat, implore —often used as a function word in introducing a question, request, or plea pray be careful
2: to get or bring by praying intransitive verb
: to make a request in a humble manner
: to address God or a god with adoration, confession, supplication, or thanksgiving

you used "Ed preyed the man was only winded from a vest hit". Should be "Ed PRAYED". See the different in the meanings? This is why it's important to proofread.

i like how spike says maybe they aren't the chatty type and Sam thinking that not that he didn't have faith in Ed's negtoiteing[so hard to spell that word] skills but that the guys weren't the talking type

oh yes! please write some sam h/c for this! pleeeeeeeeeeease?!

nice story is there going to be more?

great oneshot

Great, action packed fic! Hope there's more like this to come, I can't get enough of hurt Sam!

This was really a fantastic story to read. From the beginning till the end it was a joy to read it. I wouldnt mind a few more chapters with hurt/comfort. :) I actually hope you will find the time and muse to write some more...

Well written and totally in character for all of them. I reckon some more Sam whump chapters would be gratefully received from us readers. Keep up the great work!

Wow! I think that's your best Flashpoint chapter/oneshot yet! Loved it! Keep up the amazing work!

Loved it! Love the sam whump (lol my fave part) and then being able to turn the tables and kick ass...we need more of that. Please write more stories like this (and add a wee bit o jam also if possible). thanks

I love hurt Sam stories and this one is fantastic! I'm amazed that Sam was able to pull himself together after taking a couple of shots to the kevlar vest over his chest. But hey, it' a good thing he did or my favorite SRU officer would be dead!