Damn, I'm speechless. You told the story in an engrossing but efficient way. Great job!

You are an extremely talented authorand i believe you wrote one of the best loki x oc stories i have ever read

This is so good. I know I'm a little late to the party, but I wanted to tell you that,I am having a VERY hard time putting this down.
Stay awesome!

~Talent

I just read this story in a single breath and wow! I'm amazed! I love the plots you created! Your character is interesting and intriguing, and I love her and Loki's relationship! The writing was great, I enjoyed it. Sorry for the sucky review, I'm not that good with them. I just wanted to say - I LOVED THIS!

What the hell?!

This is great! I can't wait to read the sequel! I love her internal monologues

Perfect. Just perfect. Well written, hardly any spelling mistakes... How on EARTH did you manage to find the time to write this. Lokily is the the most beautiful ship I have ever heard of (second only to Hiddlesbatch) and I stopped breathing when you threw Doctor Who and Sherlock in the mix. All you need now is to get Marvel Studios, Lucasfilm and Steven Moffat together to make and film based on this because it is AMAZING.

yay!

I enjoyed your story. Lilly is hilarious, and I liked her character. I'm thrilled she came back to life. You made me cry though when I though she died. Thank you for writing and sharing this!

Whoohoo! You got me for a moment there; I was scared this turned into a tragedy! Bad Lily running away when finding that you're not really dead (but that is her coping strategy and it's served her well in the past). Also, it would have been rather "Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade" - Indi's thoughts: whacha all looking at?
I really thought it might have been Sigyne (sp?) who released him because she didn't want him in Asgard but that wasn't quite logical.
Great job writing the characters and the plot. One more itty bitty chapter or author's note to go. ;)
A.

dam u dam u all to HELLLL!

This story was awesome! I enjoyed reading about their story. I read this story within 2 days. It would have been one but I forced myself to sleep. Now Im off to find the sequel! :D

Hi there :) I really lo- eh like your story :)
and I really don't mind that you don't write scene behind the sheets, cause I often feels it pushes the actuall story to the backround and I have read enough smut that I usually just skip it to get on with the rest. So no worries a story doesn't need to be porned to be good even for us of age people :P
(I cant believe I actually wrote so much about that o.O dude!)
And now I'm gonna go and read the sequel!

cheers

Woah I finished this story within 6 hours. I can't believe that it's over xD AH LOKI!

This is mad! Loki?! You're married?! XDD