Hey.
this is really engaging and an amazingly deeper thinking twist on the story.
I hope someday it can be finished.

I like how you describe Garrus’s intense devotion to to what’s right!

o: what a thrilling opening!

I'm sure someone else has already notified you of this, but something weird happened to the formatting of this chapter. It makes it hard to read.

Wonderful story, I'm really enjoying it. :D

The formatting of chapter 6 looks weird. I wasn’t able to read it. I’m not sure if the site uploaded the chapter wrong.

The formatting for this chapter got super messed up and made it unreadable.

You need to fix the formatting converted to text issue on chapter 6. You *can* re-upload chapters.

This is so... I cannot find the words to describe how engaged I was reading this. Once I started, only the fact that I needed sleep made me stop. That's what I get for finding something so beautiful in the late hours of the night.

I look forward to where you take this.

omg this is great. by far the most badass Shepherd i have read. thank you for this

Is there no way to fix whatever happened to this chapter? It's SUPER hard to read this way.

So... You come back or... I just a fake alarm?

The depths of language is certainly strong, although it should be expected that people do not colloquially speak that way.

Your author's notes wreck me almost more than the story text. Whoof.

The rose petals, damn, that was some imagery.

Chills, man. Chills.