| Reviews for Big Brother Hal Explains it All |
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   ae2000x chapter 2 . 2/28 NICE NICE NICE |
| Jennex chapter 2 . 10/21/2019 I would be good for a little more of this |
| BMKiller chapter 2 . 12/5/2018 Aww that was sweet. Hal make a good big brother and protective one |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 please make another chapter! |
| BlatantBookworm chapter 2 . 12/23/2015 Aaaw. This is adorable. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2014 Crap! I forgot all about Mogo. That scared me a bit |
| Charlie A chapter 1 . 8/31/2014 I kinda spit out my cereal when I read the first word. My this is going to be fun... XD |
| ultrasparkysparkyboom chapter 2 . 6/26/2014 I am rather liking the whole 'Papa Hal' deal. I just find it that his relationship with Aya is such a wonderful thing, to see that he could befriend and become the brother of a machine so quickly (even if Aya isn't entirely a machine). I loved the story, there were some minor grammar errors in the second chapter, but other than that, it was wonderful. You got the characterization spot on, too! |
| Rarity9 chapter 2 . 4/21/2014 Well, if you do write more I'd be obe of yhe first people to jump on it. |
| Mage333 chapter 2 . 3/21/2013 I really hope this isn't the end. This story is wonderful. please if you can, keep writing this story. |
| Sounddrive chapter 2 . 3/5/2013 *squeal* I adore the ending! X3 Oh how sweet it is! Finally! Sweet, sweet life of love! |
| Sounddrive chapter 1 . 3/5/2013 Oh my goodness! XD Oh Kilowag, you make it exponentially more funny! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2012 IM CRYING BECAUSE I NEVER REALIZED THERE WAS A SECOND CHAPTER JFASDFJJJJLALASKKKL. THIS IS PERFECT AND BEAUTIFUL AND YOU ARE PERFECT AND BEAUTIFUL. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2012 YESYESYESYESYESYESYSEYES |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2012 Please, no no no! Hal Jordan CANNOT find out! That ruins all of Razer's moodiness and awkwardness! ( "The Talk" was less entertaining than "The Incident", which I loved. I laughed, I cried, it moved me. ) |
