Hey, can i... umm... can i translate this fanfiction into my language so my friends can... read it? they not really good at english. 3

Squee! Are you gonna update soon?!

Aw! So cute!

Ah, one more mistake! Gumi 'pulled Len down by his collar', but he doesn't wear one considering he's a rogue and hates them. :3 This chapter was really adorable! I love Len!

I'm so glad someone made a fic based off this song! It's my favourite LenxGumi song and you pulled it off so well! Though, you really should be careful when you imply that Gumi is very grammatical, because she says 'petted', even though the proper word is 'pet'. Besides that, I don't see any other flaws. :D Great job!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!

I love their personality, and how they sounded. So cute though I couldn't really imagine a nekomimi-filled town...

You will continue right? I will not accept a no. I will wait

Aisu

This story is great. I would love to see you write more

Hi. I would like to say in advance that this is a very nice story, and that I love cats.

I take Japanese classes and I would like to point out that 'watashi' is a feminine term for 'I'. The masculine term, or the term for boys, is 'boku'. I'm sure it would be fine for you to use 'watashi', as long as you're ready to portray him as a girly-girl to me!

Thanks for listening, and no offense!

I love your story! Continue to write it!