Reviews for Not Jealous |
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NovaDeer chapter 1 . 8/7 My heart. My soul. How dare you T-T |
CJ Riker chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 do a sequel pleassseee |
denise chapter 1 . 11/14/2016 partttttttttttt 222222222 |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2016 Roy! How could you?! |
Naomi chapter 1 . 8/6/2016 You need a sequel to this story |
vrangrmalmrvaupna chapter 1 . 4/3/2016 aaarhg could you -pretty please- write a sequelllllll please PLEASE I LOVE IT ROYAI FOR LIFE |
8ami chapter 1 . 10/1/2014 I liked it. It was sweet and sad. I like how it was structured with the Riza was not...I enjoyed the play. |
Sarah Archer chapter 1 . 7/5/2014 UGH ROYAI IS MY OTP AND HIM MARRYING ANOTHER WOMAN TOTALLY PISSES ME OFF but I still find myself loving this fic. |
96bittersweetblackcat chapter 1 . 1/4/2014 Love it. Sad but sweet :) |
Xxxxxalchemistxx chapter 1 . 8/15/2013 Awwww wow that was so kawaii and sad |
Do a Barrel Roll chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 I don't know why, but I really liked this. It was excellent. |
Elise chapter 1 . 9/14/2012 Not gonna lie, I sobbed. Planning on writing more? This is really good. |
CC-R2000 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 Very nice, I like it alot! |
noir2107 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012 Good story. Some things I found unusual were, "The Fuhrer's fiancé is approaching her, and she schools her expression to polite interest." Maybe that was just a typo. But regardless, I like how you capture Riza's angst and denial in light of Roy's engagement. It's exactly how a normal person would act under these circumstances. The last part with her and Ed was a little odd at first-I thought you were setting them up to be paired. But I realize you're not lol. Maybe Ed and Riza will help each other get their lovers back? Just speculating. Good luck writing and update. |
ClosetFMAfan chapter 1 . 5/29/2012 I actually really like this. I normally don't like stories about Roy meeting some other girl and Riza being jealous and going slightly crazy (they are a lot more abundant than you would think), but this one was really sweet. I love that you added the parental moments and the formatting was brilliant. Good job. |