Ah, that's so sweet!

Excellent. Just... that is my reaction to the whole thing. The sex, the bit of humor at the end, the "master of compromise" line. I love the way you capture this sense of natural ease between the two of them. Really nicely done.

Oh wow, amazing stuff (HOT)! And that ending was hilarious...poor Hackett.

really goood thanks for this

Very sweet story! I enjoyed it immensely, especially because I hail from NC and used to spend family vacations at the Outer Banks. It's positively beautiful there so it was very easy to visualize the entire scene.

But there are a few technical details near the end that I would change, not the least of which is the switch of perspective. Send me a PM if you want me to give you more details.