Aww this is a beautiful fic. I love Advanceshipping.

Nice oneshot
As a superhero fan I would like to see ash fight aquaman and namor to see who the undisputed sea king really is

Your story was just wonderful. It would be great if this was either an episode or a movie. Reading this was really a great thing to read and a lot of what you put into it is all true. If the creators were smart enough they would make this a reality thing because Ash really is Manaphy's father and May's mother. I give your story 5 stars, 50/10, and any other way of rating it. You would make a great writer if you wanted to. I love your story and I hope you keep up the great work. )

Nice story enjoyed it

AWESOME!

i love it 10 stooting stars

aww soo sweet :3

Well I've found another fanfic series that I like and to be honest I always thought that in the season of Pokemon with may in them I thought her and ash would meet up on day and well the rest is kind of like the fanfic just before he was called king of the sea

onneword: luv! i loved it so much!

im sure it will be great cause im loving jealousy hookup and im going to love ur other stories i know it

Awwwww this reminds me of my favourite pokemon movie the temple of the Sea king because it was full of Advanceshipping!

From Advanceshipper01

I was always an Advanceshipping fan. After I saw the movie, I thought:
If Manaphy was Prince of the Sea, that makes May Queen of the Sea. And the legend goes that whoever restored the crown was King of the Sea; Ash did just that so that means May and Ash were technically a 'couple'. However, I thought that was stupid and wondered if anyone shared the same theory as me. Thank goodness there is! I enjoyed this story.

Aww, this was so cute! I love fics with manaphy in them, and I loved how wish as incorporated into this. XD Man, this was sooo good!

I'm sorry im too tired to give a full out review at the moment, but let me just say I thoroughly adored this! XD

Excellent as usual my favourite writer of all times!

I was pretty happy that you included Manaphy in this story too! I'm so excited that Manaphy finally make his way into your story.

It touching! Love the ending!

Looking forward to see your works in the future!

I'm gonna rated this 9999/10 xD

A touching little reunion story.

What I really like here is how you didn't overkill on emotional and descriptive stuff (kinda like me) and you got to the point quick.

Oh and just me here, Advanceshipping stories with Manaphy or any other Movie 9 references always get my attention.

No real issues here for me to pick at except maybe one I noticed:

"But not as beautiful as you?"

Not 100% sure why that's a question but that's the only real "issue" here that I can call out.

Oh and also, welcome back. It's been forever since you wrote something new.

I look forward to seeing your future fics, meanwhile I think this will do well in the contest.