Reviews for First
DevilsAngelSaphire chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
I enjpyed reading it. thank you for sharing.
Lots of Love,
Devilsangelsaphire
LW12 chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
Very good
TheCherryBlossumWriter chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Hillarious!
Sena145 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I like it just make it longer, I am starting to get tired of one-shots
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
loved it really short though
TheProposal1 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
O.o... :D
The Cretin chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hot, yet sad. Realistic, yet surreal. I applaud. You make them go well together as one. Keep rockin
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Cool!

simple but great.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
more !
oaktavor chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
sexy&sad