Reviews for Abandoned and Lost Brother Version
Angellious79 chapter 10 . 5/17/2015
JUST TELL US IF ACE DIES OR LIVES, KUSO!

Sorry. But seriously, you can just write one short sentence, and I would be satisfied with this story! I actually want to read more….
Thank you for making this story, the readers really appreciated it! And we learned of some new torture methods…(evil laughter)
Yeah, thank you, and please, just one small sentence?
balrock chapter 7 . 10/8/2014
He kind of reminds me of peter from ender's gME
Traveller chapter 10 . 3/5/2014
Wow can i just say that this is completely amazing and i cant wait to read the next chapter. I hope i will be able to wait that long considering i just read all 12 chapters, and its 2.30 in the morning. Oh well thats what u get for becoming sucked into a fanfic before bed... anyway from one writer to another, well done, i am impressed.
ichigi111kurosaki chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
:O more? Please!
PotatoesTomatoesToes chapter 10 . 7/6/2013
I NEED the next chapter! Please, I hope Ace lives, he has to. He went through so much already. TwT
FuuYuki34 chapter 10 . 3/27/2013
Gosh, your story made me crying...
Please...don't make Ace die...
Pretty BIG PLEASE with cherry on top!
AikoLoveGirl chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
Plz dont make him die!
azab chapter 10 . 12/4/2012
i loved it a lot and hope ace make it through and noooooooooooo the story will end in next chapter nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooo
Mountain97 chapter 10 . 12/3/2012
Ffffffffffffffffffffffffffff ffffuuuuuuuuu...
Q.Q
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO MY FEELS? TnT WHY?! *sniff* I don't think they'll ever recover...
IF YOU KILL ACE...gah. Seriously, wasn't once bad enough? I read fanfiction to RELIEVE me of my I'm-beyond-depressed-over-Ace's-death syndrome, not MAKE IT WORSE.
That doctor...he better watch his words. There will be hell to pay if he so much as BEGINS to say anything that begins with the letter 'D'.
Masure, that F*CKHEAD is finally dead and the world can...partially rejoice. GD IT ACE, WHY DO YOU ALWAYS SAVE OTHERS BEFORE YOURSELF? *sniff*
If you kill him...I will be mightily upset. To say the least.

Unrelated post-script: Does this mean you have internet again? :D
BluePhoenix0101 chapter 10 . 12/2/2012
I just read the AceLu versioning a few minutes ago. They're both soooo good, and I hope you update soon
e chapter 10 . 12/2/2012
ace has to live please dont stop
BluePhoenix0101 chapter 8 . 10/13/2012
Why, Ace? Why? Don't you dare die!

Great story, but I perfer the AceLu version.

Hope you update soon!
plishee444 chapter 8 . 7/4/2012
it was pretty good, but i really want to hear/ learn /read more about ace during his time as a slave.
please update soon!
Mountain97 chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
:O ONLY TWO MORE? this chapter wasn't actually that bad. The end was a little...meh, but other than that it was fine. IF YOU KILL THEM I KILL YOU, GOT IT?
D4rkenedSkies chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
this may sound useless since i believe a lot of people have said this but...

when is the next! I CAN'T WAIT! XD
call me crazy, but I really like these angst!
hell! beat me! is it possible to get more angsty and tragic than this?
gosh! Can't wait!
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