Pls continue this story! I really love Stinglu!

Wtf?! How could you have Lucu forgive that bitch just like that?! No one should cheat on their boyfriend with someones husband and get away with it that easily!

i fuly hate lisanna nd i hate the ship nali but otherwise this storys pretty good thank you nd update

Wow, much better on the descriptions of everyone's emotions, and I love how you added the uncertainty that often times comes with unplanned pregnancies, so I thing you did marvelous on that. The switching point of views were a bit difficult to follow at times because I wasn't sure of what time some of the things were happening, like when Lucy was sitting in the park, then Natsu and Lisanna found her, then it switched back over to Lucy and there was that part about Sting looking for her...yeah I's still not sure if that park scene with Lucy, Natsu, and Lisanna was referring to the time Lucy was invited to dinner with the other two, or...yeah, still confused. Other than that it was an enjoyable chapter.

Aww crap. So we're going down that road are we? Damn. Again, I liked the chapter, but my personal preferences are getting in the way of my enjoyment of it. The whole pregnancy revelation being case in point. I don't like to read about them, and I most certainly cringe when someone being pregnant takes up a huge amount of the story or is just about what the whole story revolves around. I know that creating a whole new person is kind of a big deal, but still, please, for a love of God (and I know it's 2016 now, so asking this now is kind of pointless), don't focus the story on someone's pregnancy. I thought this story was supposed to be about Lucy moving on from Natsu and finding what she needs and wants in Sting (and Sting finding those things in Lucy), not the first half being about getting over being unwanted, and then the rest of it being about the drama of pregnancy. *Huff* Rant over. That's my personal preference, I'm sorry if it annoys you, and really, I'm not trying to offend anyone here, it's just my opinion. That and just because this story has an element in it which I may or may not like, that doesn't mean it's still not a good story and that I won't read it. Besides, the pregnancy was just mentioned in this chapter, so there's still plenty of opportunity to surprise members of the audience, like me, who don't like a story that talks about pregnancy for any extended period of time. And besides, there have been instances in this story where I wasn't too fond of the pacing or diction, but I stuck with it this long, and I'm not about to go running at the sight of the next chapter.
Now, with all that being said, I did in fact like the chapter. The pacing wasn't too quick, and there were some developments between characters that the audience would definitely appreciate, along with some fluff and a little bit of comic relief. The little bit of bantering between Sting and Lucy at the beginning of the chapter and near the end was kind of cute, and gives the audience a sense that those two have really settled into a relaxed rhythm with each other. Whether or not they'll be able to handle the challenges of pregnancy and a baby, however, remains to be seen. The proposal between Gajeel and Levy was cute, though maybe just a tad cliche, and as I've seen on one occasion, prone to publicly humiliate the one proposing when the answer is "no". Good thing Levy said "yes".
Loved the cliffhanger at the end with that shocking revelation, even if I personally didn't like the subject matter. If there were any such hints at Lucy being pregnant, I never saw, so excellent job at hiding those. My only rub with this story so far, is that we the readers can clearly see that Sting and Lucy are attracted to each other, but we have yet to see their relationship tested, and by "tested" I mean some conflict on which they each take opposing sides. Couples fight, and couples have disagreements, but what makes a couple a good combination is how well they handle the problem and whether or not they can solve it together, and be able to remain a couple afterwards on good terms with each other. While I'm sure on some level Sting and Lucy have an attachment to each other, I'm not fully convinced that their bond has been tested, which is why I have a little bit of a problem with the pregnancy (aside from not wanting the story to revolve around it, that is). I know that this isn't a perfect world, and not all babies will be born into a stable family within which the relationships are all healthy. I also know that not all babies born were necessarily planned pregnancies, but can still be born to loving parents who will make the situation work, regardless. HOWEVER, I feel that Sting and Lucy don't quite have all their ducks in a row yet (not to say things aren't looking good so far) and I don't think that Lucy becoming pregnant will really help matters. Personally, I'd like to see the couple in question sort out some of the uncertain variables (housing, income, security, etc...) first before having a baby (of course the choice in the matter pertaining to the baby has already been taken away at this point, so I suppose I shouldn't be really mentioning it).
But hey, this is your story, you're the author, and if you want things to work, and you write it to be that way, then that's what it will be. The above rant(?) is just my thoughts on the matter. And again, there are plenty of elements that can still be enjoyed by the audience, so no worries.

Now that's a whole lot more like it. More details, more interactions between our leading lady and her man, more focus on the emotions. And a pinch of drama complete with mild violence. Mmmmm, Spicy! Hehehe, sorry. Anyway, I liked the sort-of-cliffhanger you left us on, it gave the readers something interesting to read, while at the same time promising more interesting reactions, as well as a conflict and a bit of attention of Natsu's emotional response. Liked it a lot. Very well done! :D

Okay, I'm not one for fast-paced stories. They just seem kind of...hasty, or impromptu, but damn, the way you wrote Sting and Lucy falling in love and getting married in this chapter was pretty good. I mean, it was rather quick, and I do appreciate you mentioning that the characters are aware of how fast things are moving. However, this is why I liked the chapter in spite of how (somewhat unrealistically) quickly they fell in love and decided to get married; you added in time-skips where you highlighted just how strongly they feel about each other. I mean, they met, had some chemistry, then went on a one-year-training-and-vacation spree, and then got married within about ten months. It was pretty fast, yet the way you worded their attraction and mutual love and respect for one another makes it seem like even less of a big deal...
Or I just have a warped view of the world and have no concept of how long a stable romantic relationship should take to form. That may very well be the case, but I will say this; Sting and Lucy might have gotten hitched a little too soon in my opinion, but at least it was within ten months rather than ten weeks. Best of luck to them...sort of...
At any rate, I actually like this chapter a lot (if I haven't said it too much already) and that's a lot coming from someone who can handle fluff, mushiness, and flowery love poetry dialogue only in more moderate amounts. Also I have a bit of a grim view on romance in general, so you writing something someone like me can tolerate only means that you're beginning to appeal to a larger audience. Well done! :D

Well this is an instructing story now I want to read the rest!

I'm kind of lost but it's a good story I got lost on the past 4-5 chapters some where but it's a good story.

Oh MAN! This is soooo interesting! It's an awesome story! ...but Why'd you have to make the baby die! ::(

Harold's a fucking hypocrite because he uses magic too.

Ohh I hope that Cain person doesn't ruin Sting and Lucy's relationship. Anyway glad to see a new chapter hopefully to see more soon :)

Wait did lisanna and natsu break up!? Nooooo! Friken Cain ruined nail! And I'm so happy you had the time to update this.

Another chapter please

Yeah! Finally! I'm so happy with the review!
Your story is aweasome. So Lucy is moving on, there will be another baby (ies), right? I hope so hahah
Keep writing, and update as soon as possible!
Yeah, exams sucks! Good luck with it! ;)