Wow oh wow, this was very very good. You are a great writer. Hope you will do more of this couple even if they are not on tv together

Intense. Good job.

Woah... that was ... wow. Thanks for sharing, and may the muse be with you.

Oh gosh! That was so beautiful! I hate what happened to Sharon but at least it had a good ending.

Great story. I really enjoyed reading it! Great writing as well.

Brilliantly written I loved it from start to finish great story line captivating.

What has it been? 7 years? Maybe 8 that I have been your fic-butch? Ha! And I finally registered for an account.

I might be slightly biased...but this is by far your best story. You created this darkness within Sharon that has never been explored, while still maintaining the core of who we know her to be. Well done, doll, well done.

Now get to work on your next story!

Interesting chapter. Sharon sure seems to have some issues, what with the smoking and the drinking and the asshole ex. I actually kind of like a darker Sharon. Her persona on the show was always very mysterious, as they never mentioned much about her personal life. It was intriguing the way her ex called her out on being wet for Brenda, who clearly excites her. Sharon was pretty defensive about it too. I liked the dynamic between Brenda and Fritz, the way she's pulling away, the anger. It'll be amusing to see how things play out between them.

Amazing. I hope this isn't ending?

Short and sweet! Loved it.

I hate that this is ending but it's probably for the best. I've had stories I've let go too far. This has been an excellent, different, dark story. I'm glad you tackled it and I'm glad you gave it justice with good writing. -T

When you find a story so well written and intriging that you can't wait to get home to finish the chapter you started at work...this is it. I haven't finished this story but will tonight probably. I like that you've gone so deep into the psyche of Sharon...and that's just from reading part of the first story! lol

Ok, I have no idea how to say that in English, so I'm just going to act as if you could read French: *Fait des bonds de bonheur partout autour de l'ordinateur*.
FINALLY! :D Fritz is so... so Fritz but he finally admitted what he knew and... and I'm going to kill Mitchell. Yeah, a fictionnal character. I'm soooooo going to kill him. And I actually hope that Brenda already did so, so I can make him live again just to be able to kill him once again. But seeing (hum... no comment) Sharon like this... Why do you think we always need to make her suffer? Is she so tough in the series that we have this need to make her seem fragile?
We are seriously touched, people. You, because you wrote that. And everyone of your readers, because we enjoy very much doing so.
Anyway, you told us that it would be a 10 chapter fanfic, so I guess this is almost the end, and I kind of need a happy ending there... please? *puppy eyes* (you know you need one too :p)
And, eventually... a special distinction to that one: "Sharon closed her eyes and leaned back on to the hospital room pillow. "Take me home." She finally stated." Just loved that :D

I really love this story. I can not wait for another update

Did he rape her? Can't wait for more!