Very well done chapter. Shame this was published before the assassin's creed movie back in 2016

We are going to be killed by the sun?
Metallia?

Conner will be carving wood.
What else?

I agree with Desmond.
Fast forward all Ezio's dalliances.
I mean imagine me walking up to you and saying that you have to, really HAVE to, watch this movie with me.
It's a porno with your grandfather in it.
And boy is he good.
...
No, that would not be okay, not watching that in a million years.
No matter how 'good'.
...
Thank you for sharing.

You all did a fantastic job blending the game with other sources. The amount of time AC2 covers is tremendous, but your transitions covering the time skips were smooth. Having recently finished playing through AC2 for the first time, this novelization has helped me understand the storyline better. Just started playing ACB (I am so behind the curve), so I'll definitely be reading your novelization of it.

I don't think any amount of praise will give justice to this fic. I understand Ezio so well now. Cristina's death made me emotional, Ezio's family made me sad. Desmond's little moments, and THE END WITH THE BLEEDING EFFECT AND MINERVA WOAH.

I never played AC 1, 2 and brotherhood. But tgese novelizatioms maje me want to and not want to (because it's done so well hrre) at the same time.

Excited for the next novels!

I think my favorite parts of these stories are the little snippets of Desmond's thoughts floating in through the memories-they're always so hilarious.

Wow! This is sure a headrush. Ezio's journey of being an assassin. Desmond's slowly going insane because of bleeding effect. Laughing at Desmond's reaction to Ezio's amorous adventures as well as Ezio being dim for not knowing Leonardo having feelings for him along with his sexuality. It is also amazing about adding characterizations to many people. This is quite amazing.

Love yalls novelization especially the character development. Finished this in about a week and am going to read the rest. great job

It was intresting to read your review uptill the entering venice part, or should I say "Fucking Each Other Senceless Part" - I think Ezio Seeked more, but thats what most of these women could offer him, and Two different rules applies to the two genders even if you wanted to put them in equal footing, this is the most simple solution, as from the ages of the old. A man who seeks or indulges in the company of a lot of women DOES actually tindeed understand and hink of women far more than those spineless emasculated sorry excuse of males subscribing to the feminist abolishon of man preeching a woman to be treated with respect respect, honor of fidility, even if undeserving, those who have no honor jumping shaft to rafts, and unlikely would it be the Alpha Womanizer who would settle for any such whores and sorry excuses of women.

Probably should've put AC's Novelization review on the last chapter... Oops :P Anyway

Ya know, i kinda liked Altair better.. :P

Claps allround for the two of you (and you too Beta! I won't forget you XD!) Great job, I hope your heads don't hurt too much from all the head hitting the wall. The whole story flows great!

You have my sincere gratitude and other such thanks for being "prudes". (as you so put it)!

Its a weird flip, in AC the Desmond bits were nice, but I kinda wanted to get back to Altair to find out what happened next. In AC2 it was Desmond that I looked forward to.

The ending was confusing. Minerva really didn't help things. Its not your fault, its more so...apple logic not being explained. Which is also not your fault. Desmond fighting the guards was satisfying though XD

Now... Off to find the next adventure... once I figure out which one that is...sigh they can't just name these in sensible order could they :P
Laters
Hyjinks

A grammar error in the 2nd sentence is tough to move passed but I'm going to try. (should have been "knew" not "new")

Well, this fic was great. Including this chapter. This was greatness in interpretation, you handled the time skips so well, the Oc's are very well written...I loved it. This chapter was good, the fight with Rodrigo, Minerva's message in the Vault, then Desmond and his Bleeding Effect. Awesome and thanks for writing these fics. They matter, they mean so much, they are such a great service for the Games and for us, fans as well.

Wow. This chapter was great, with the last part of Bonfire of Vanities and the Codex Pages Puzzle, but I feel it was focused on Cristina. Damn, it was...disturbing. Empathy made this hard to read, in a good way. It made my clutch my heart and hope nothing like this will ever happen to me. Poor Ezio. I wondered when did Cristina died when I heard of it in Revelations...and because I haven't 75 percent synch in AC:B I haven't played that Cristina memory yet. I wondered why there are 5 of them if the fourth is the break up one...and now it makes sense. They are repressed memories for a reason. Thanks for spoilers, and at the same time..thanks for making sense.

Awesome chapter! I loved all that history, which did flow, and I loved the Bonfire of Vanities. It made more sense to have Paola and Mario and Volpe to help Ezio then to have him do all those gorgeous but a bit boring assassinations. I can't tell you how hard I tried to kill that monk...and the painter was my first kill. Anyways. I like Federica. I remember that I wanted to say in the previous review that it was FUNNY that Ezio wanted to kill Ulderico "by accident".