Reviews for Child's Play
CrazyDreamerCircle chapter 3 . 1/14
Awww, nice priest
RoseTintedShades chapter 20 . 12/16/2018
I would love to read more! This was one of the first fanfics I have ever read and I hope they one day it will be continued...
marz1000 chapter 19 . 8/22/2016
I know it's unlikely but it would be amazing if you were to continue this story. I just love it!
Guest chapter 19 . 4/16/2014
This is awesome. Like maybe he remembers little by little. Please update!
Hetalia Ivan Braginski chapter 3 . 3/30/2014
I like it so far, but his name is "Charles" on the X- Men. It's "Jean-Luc" on Star Trek: the Next Generation.
CreggaFoeseeker chapter 19 . 1/9/2014
I was just getting used to Remy as a kid. But now its worse. He's an adult in a kids body. heh-heh-heh. Eagerly awaiting more. Can't wait to see how it ends.
Cregga
Guest chapter 19 . 11/11/2013
I just found this story and I wanna say, it rocks! I read it in three days! You've really given it a kind of nostalgic feel that reminds me of some of the 90s comics, you know, back when things were simple lol. Anyway, this is a really great story and I hope you continue it!
Akaifu chapter 19 . 9/28/2013
Let him remember some of it!
Also; your back c:
CaptMackenzie chapter 19 . 8/20/2013
Cute little scene, although I'm still missing the toddler!Remy. He was so precious ... like all the characters, I feel like a precious relationship has just been ruined & stomped on by this grumpy-gus. :( I hope you can get back into your groove soon! Thanks for updating.
NAOA chapter 19 . 8/18/2013
So glad you're continuing this! This is great!
Jenna chapter 19 . 8/18/2013
You're back! I don't check this site to often anymore but today I decided to give it a shot and you're back! I am so glad you've decided to continue, I love this story so much! I personally don't think that Remy should remember his time as a child. I hope you had a great time traveling. I'm looking forward to more soon.
Akaifu chapter 18 . 8/7/2013
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BrowniePoints chapter 18 . 5/15/2013
This is good. I like the cute with young!Remy and the X-Men. Naming the alligator Rogue was cute too.
I've gotten to the end of it now, and I'll check back every now and then to see if it's been updated; I think this is worth keeping an eye on and is a good story. I love Gambit, and you've kinda left your audience with...well, not a cliffhanger, exactly, but a break where we want to know what happens next.

Alright, constructive criticism time: commas. The lack of commas in places they should be doesn't break the flow of the story, but it does jump out (though that could be just me. I'm a bit of a punctuation nit-picker and I know it). That's not really that important, because most fanfic readers will still know exactly what you mean without commas; it's just something I noticed.
Something that could help the story flow a little better: you have these big blocks of text. I read much of this story on my iPod, where only so many words fit on the screen at a time and it's pretty manageable, but when you get on a full-size computer screen, the wall of text is a little daunting. If you want a good place to break for smaller paragraphs, my suggestion is whenever the dialogue switches. I don't think there's any examples in this chapter, but I remember seeing different characters speaking in the same paragraph, and if you decided to break them any smaller you could use that.
It's a good story. You said something about "another de-aging fic to add to the archive", or something like that, but this feels unique and different to me, possibly because it's centered on Gambit. I'll admit, I haven't read a lot of X-Men fic. This one caught my eye because I stumbled on "Unbelievable", which led me to your profile to see if I liked any of your other writing...and, lo and behold! Several highly entertaining stories.
Thank you for adding a Gambit fix I didn't even know I wanted to my day!
NicoPony chapter 18 . 5/11/2013
HaHa! Glad to see an update. That is so cute, cuss words coming out of sweet widdle Wemy's mouth.
CreggaFoeseeker chapter 18 . 5/6/2013
Oh boy! Well I guess it was too much to hope for that things would go smoothly and Remy would wake up as a complete adult, with memories of being de-aged intact.
I think I like little Remy better. I await more
cregga
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