This is one of my absolute favorite star trek stories! good shit!

So I'm not a medical student or anything... but if Jim started having an allergic reaction and was given adrenaline I'm pretty sure you can give them a sedative too minutes later.. idk.

Ahhhh! Pike! Next chapter!

Really great chapter :) I like where this is going!

(FORMERLY KNOWN AS GUEST) I THINK YOU ARE DOING FINE WITH YOUR STORY. I ALSO AGREE THAT THE 2009 MOVIE WAS THE BETTER ONE. THEY REALLY NEED TO STOP BLOWING UP THE SHIP. THANKS FOR GIVING ANOTHER CHAPTER. SOMETHING IS PLAYING FUNNY WITH MY ALERTS,SO I HAVE TO CHECK FOR UPDATES IN A DIFFERENT WAY. I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER. UNTIL THEN THANK YOU FOR SHARING.

I GOT A NEW COMPUTER AND AM STILL TRYING TO CATCH UP. I DON'T REMEMBER READING THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS BUT I THINK THEY ARE AS GOOD AS THE REST. BECAUSE I HAVE BEEN REALLY ENJOYING YOUR STORY. HOPE TO SEE AN UPDATE SOON. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING.

YOU ARE DOING A GOOD JOB AND IF THE WHOLE PAGE IS INTENSE IT MAKES IT A HARD READ. IT MAKES IT HARD TO FOCUS WHEN IT GOES ON TOO LONG. THANKS.

EVERY STORY NEEDS FOUNDATION AND BACKGROUND. WE START TI RELATE THAT WAY.

YES IT IS A GOOD START TO YOUR STORY. SO I AM GLAD I STARTED IT. THANKS.

Thanks for updating! Hugs all around!

Hey! Excited to see another chapter, can't wait to see more. Curious as to how Jim ended up in his current situation. Look forward to seeing more of the legendary friendship develop!

Great chapter! (and I took the opportunity to re-read the whole sotry and loved it so much!)

I hope they get those cruel cadets on attempted murder charges! I'll bet Pike hit the roof!

IT IS A GOOD START. I ALWAYS FIGURED THERE WAS A LOT MORE ROOM FOR STORIES IN BETWEEN FOR THOSE TWO. IT IS NICE SOMEONE IS TACKLING IT. EVEN IN TOS, BONES COULD NOT BE OVER LOOKED AND HE SHOULDN'T IN 2009. I THINK YOU WILL BE OKAY. THANK YOU FOR SHARING WITH US.

Good story, like the way Jim and McCoy interact with each other. Would love to see the rest of this.