Reviews for Demon village
meitanteieztr chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
Dear author,
Your grammer is great and the way the chapter is written is really well organized but I have just one problem with this first chapter.
How was he sure the blood seal would open if he didn't know Minato was his father?
Kingkong101 chapter 6 . 3/14/2019
Little bitch naruto
kissrose36 chapter 8 . 5/7/2015
next chapter please
Zero chapter 8 . 7/14/2014
I like your story it was really good. I liked how you didn't have Naruto being cold and hate konoha, you made him his still happy self but a little hurt which was really good. So keep up the good work
the white wolf Haruka chapter 8 . 5/20/2014
Please write the next chapter! I LOVE this story ! :) :) :)
Silver Dragon Master chapter 8 . 1/2/2014
you should update
killer4853 chapter 6 . 12/17/2013
like it
dragonmaster1748 chapter 8 . 9/14/2013
You are a good writer and i can not wait for the next chapter
the new dude chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
I would definitely watch this if it was on TV sure it doesn't have fighting but its cool
the new dude chapter 7 . 6/11/2013
Dude I kind of like this stuff so don't stop
SHSL Caffeine Addict chapter 8 . 3/2/2013
Way to go Hinata!She showed them but I feel bad for chapter I hope you update soon. :D
alex02 chapter 8 . 2/8/2013
cool cant wait to see more
god of all chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon.
Yoshi230 chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
Wow karmas a bitch doesn't hiashi
bankai777 chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
hiashi truly has screwed up big time and it has costed him dearly.
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