Nicely written;-)

That was beautiful! :) The way you wrote these characters and everything, I really enjoyed it!

I really think that if Natasha would admit something like that ferom her past and childhood (even if Coulson already knows), its different to hear it from herself and it shows much! Just like his reaction to what she said and how he thanked her for her trust.

And the whole thing with the Captain lying there.. Even that was wonderful! :)

Very elegant characterization.

Nicely done! You did a great job on the writing. I had great visualization all the way through.