Awh so cauutteee.. and btw I feel the same way with u about the last day of holiday (or free time).. Bummer huh?

cool althouh its missing somthing

Hey I love ur stories inclueding this one :)

Awww...nice!

*sigh* i feel your pain...in a few days will be school again...

nice one by the way! especially the part about jack finishing all the cake! that made me laugh

Nice story! You always fascinate me with your fanfics. :D Hopefully in your spare time, you're gonna be able to create more... ;)