Looking at the intro of the chapter you may have predicted the future of the world ending in 2021! I miss you and your unique writing style, you are not forgotten

The Honorverse walks in wearing a white beret. Nice touch.

Assuming the Dragonriders of Perm novels exist in the story, Harry and Company could actually pick up a few tricks, especially from Dragonsdawn... Just an FYI. This is a good fic.

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I dont comment on stories very often but I had too. I LOVE YOUR DISCLAIMERS! I found myself skipping through the actual story on the 2nd book so I could read all the disclaimers 1st, then went back and read the actual story. I think the Great Who Who Search, would be an awesome short story! I would totally read that weird ass story. I love you guys and god bless you for your writing talents.

While I have really enjoyed your story so far a part of me cant help but morn one particular aspect of cannon P.E.R.N. As far as I can tell from cannon P.E.R.N. every mating flight of a bonded dragon made the rider uncontrollably horny or rowdy. Not only that but nearby non riders were also affected. I think this is an attempt to make the story younger audience friendly or maybe this just works for your story better but I think that having the riders overwhelmingly affected for every one of their bonded dragons mating flight would show a stronger bond between rider and dragon. This is your story though and you have done a really good job portraying the new bond. I just thought it was an interesting challenge for riders to overcome. They would have to schedule important meeting and events around mating flights. Could you just imagine Harry in an important meeting with a female ambassador when his dragon rises in a mating flight and Harry and whoever is close to him is overcome with dragon induced lust. Oh well something like that might make a good Omake.

hello Bob hope that everything is going well with your health. I have been a long time fan of your work.

And so this most excellent tale ends with the title of the fourth book of a classic trilogy.
I wonder how many speculated if this was a hint by Bob that he was contemplating a fourth part.
Whether he was or not, alas, it was not to be.
On to part three!

Harry is way too good for Hermione. It's odd that you want to write a H/Hr/OC because Hermione seems to be the weakest (mentally), most judgy, rider out there and you want to pair him up with Hermione. May is a lot softer and gentler whereas Hermione is like a tumultuous hurricane. She'll destroy everything if she's not happy.

A little clarification here, but wasn’t Neville’s grandmother killed in the first story?

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Thank you for writing this! It’s wonderful and I’ve really enjoyed reading it. Best of luck for the future.

This is a really great sequel to the first story. I really like the way you have followed on, without making it feel forced, from the first book. I liked how you brought in a bit more "reality", for want of a better word, into this crossover, something I find lacking in the original HP and Pern series. By that I mean, you didn't shy away from unpleasant situations, or insist on making your version of Harry a bit more human, and still affected by the abuse he suffered.

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outstanding chapter and book. i looked forward to that speech since book one.