Reviews for Fumbling Toward Family |
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Bb34 chapter 1 . 4/30 I wished there was more to this it was really good. |
DaylightDark chapter 1 . 11/2/2019 This fanfic is one of the sweetest things that I ever read! 3 (Sorry, idk speak english) |
dnofsunshine chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 I loved this. Good job. |
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 1 . 11/4/2017 Ugh, my heart is hurting. Ugh, ugh. The pain. |
darkynstars chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 What. In. The. World...? WHAT IS THIS!? It's a simple one-shot, but it's so pact with feels!? Ugh, this is so heart-wrenching! I could really see this happen, by the way. I love this! You, Author, are amazing! It's heartwarming too, but knowing what later happened to Shiro makes this story bittersweet. He's such a great dad. The last scene was a great view of his growth to becoming their loving and supportive father. Rin is such a great older brother! Even when he was still a baby, he was protecting and worried about Yukio! Wow, I love him. Those three are fantastic characters. |
mania20 chapter 1 . 4/20/2017 i loooveee it sooo much i could sing, god thatbwas sweet, i pray there will be more things like this |
Feiy chapter 1 . 3/2/2017 This is so cute and I love how realistic the situation seemed. |
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 11/14/2016 Oh this just made my heart happy :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2016 *coos* |
Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 1 . 7/17/2016 Awww, poor Shiro but that last part of this scene was cute. Good job. |
DevotedDreamer chapter 1 . 7/8/2015 Such a touching story! :') I wish there were more stories like this one out there. Beautiful work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015 C'est trop bien! . |
Qapleulia chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 omg no this is too cute |
K.E.Alvarez chapter 1 . 7/19/2014 Oh my god, that was probably one of the most adorable things I've read! Nice job :) |
Dark Starlight Nekomata chapter 1 . 7/2/2014 Can I just cry right now? Because that was just adorable and incredibly heart-wrenching. T.T This was a great job, by the way. Thank you for writing and sharing this amazing, tear jerking, wonderful yet simple one-shot. :') |