This is so beautiful and sad. I would love to read more fan fiction about the love lives of these four monoarchs.

(I shall do my best not to ramble.)

I thought it was well written and I loved it. So sad and beautiful. I needed a good sad story today. But there are male trees in canon, just thought you'd like to know that, not sure if anybody else said that. But that's a minor technicality and I just really enjoyed the story, obviously since I put it in my favorites. Please keep writing.

That was beautiful and heartbreaking. I hadn't intended to read the whole thing when I started, but it flows like poetry or pure water and I couldn't stop.

I always thought that the four children really ought to get married while they were there. Unfortunately, the results are terribly sad, because they must leave.

-Psyche

So sad, but such a unique perspective, of a tree who fell in love with a man. Thank you for your story.

So sad for Iiwyfen as she is left behind in Narnia. But what about Peter does he remember his wife and is longing to reunited with her?

Terrific and very tragic.

This is glorious. It is beautifully written and so very, very sad. It captures the idea of human young love and how it might so foreign to a tree and where they finally find love and a future. It all begs for expansion but on the other hand is just perfect as is. I love the description of their bonding in the great forest before the Eldest Tree and her lovely statement, "you may have my tree for your keeping." This is a wonderful story of a glimpse after and the deep grief to the Narnians had their monarchs failed of their duty to secure a succession. Perfect. I am so glad I have you on alert!

I really enjoyed this, thank you