This was written on the day I was born lmao

Effettivamente non l'avevo mai vista in questo modo però Wedge ha ragione, Luke ha disobbedito ad un ordine durante una battaglia.
Il fatto che lui abbia obbedito Ben non conta perché non è a lui che doveva obbedienza quando si è in un esercito, anche se raffazzonato come quello ribelle, ma ai superiori.
Mi è piaciuto questo momento che hai raccontato.
Ciao alla prossima.

Woah, this was good. Real feelings, real consequences.

Excellent.

that was sad! i almost cried, man. so much angst and tension, its so sad to see them this way, so broken, especially wedge, man, i would feel like crap if someone told me all that. great, just amazing.

wow, that was intersting. loved it.

lovely, varghona. again, a lovely peice of work. ive read all of your stuff on WAAS, and was delighted to see you here on ff.n so i could actually tell you how much i enjoyed your work without becoming a nuisance over e-mail. i'm not much one for the wedge/luke pairing, but that's simply because im not a fan of luke. but i can definitely see the relationship happening. im a sucker for wedge, and your fics always show a side of him that is rarely ever shown. so bravo, on another beautifully written peice.

What a fabulous ending for a fabulous story. It seems most people write the action or the character interation, but you wrote a story that was about character interaction about the action. Okay, that only kind of makes sence because it's been a long day and it's really cold. Yeah...but good job. Also good job on the Luke/Wedge dynamic-honestly, I don't think they would have become lovers, but if they did, that's how they would interact. So many people think slashcreepy relationship, when why would it matter? So...yeah. Good times.

Woah. That brought a tear to the eye... I really like it. You should write more like this.

1-*sniff* Awe! Not enough slash though. It could have been a good story without the innuendos.

2-It was implied WAS SO TRAGIC!

1-Tragic... and confusing. We give it 7/10

* Good for you

ouch. that must've hurt...though it's very well written

This is beautifully written, but . . . the slash element really has no reason to be there. It would be just as powerful, just as heart-wrenching, without the slash.

I just wonder why you felt compelled to include it. It adds absolutely nothing to the story to make Luke & Wedge gay lovers instead of friends & squadmates.

Wow! Is that the end?

Wow! Another touchingly gut-wrenching story from you. I really enjoyed this one. I really felt Wedge's pain here. Always thought that he was stuck with an unfair association from having to bail out of the trench due to a malfuntion. I especially liked the ending. It felt like a punch in the stomach. Yes, Wedge what do you need?

-Tusken

this was an incredibly well written story. very sad, but you did such an

excellent job on it. no ooc stuff, and the emotions were very real. i also

like how you fit it into the storyline. great job!

Uh oh. finish.