Great chapter,

Incredible. All the characters feel extremely real and true to the anime. I was also genuinely tense during the substitution jutsu part. Can't wait for another chapter, keep them coming!

You are on a roll! Really liking the edited chapters, even though they are technically longer they feel less cluttered and more information dense. Looking forward to chapter 3!

Ok this is probably a crak fic but some it could be believable lol.

I think it would be better if you replace the chapters- the reviews you have received will be deleted if you delete the chapters

AAHHHH IT'S HERE!
I've been waiting for an update and man, I was not disappointed.
The new version is a little longer but well put together I would say, you also made some changes which is great. I always like the concept of dimensions travel in your fanfic, it's so eerie and that makes it believable, somewhat. I can't wait for the more plot-y stuff to start again huehue

Greetings from Germany!

Well well well... So you think you can just come crawling back with a new rewrite without warning and i'll just binge-read it without a second thought? Cause you're gosh-darn right! Great rewrite, looking forward to a new rewrite perhaps in my lifetime, maybe? ;)

I haven't read a single chapter yet. Let me ask you, should I start from the original chapter 1, or from this chapter 1?

Finally, took you long enough. Almost makes it seem like you had important things to be doing, instead of writing stories for strangers on the internet ;) Really looking forward to the future edits and the elusive Chapter 14!

This is singularly one of the most amusing, original and interesting fanfictions I've read in this fandom - and I've been on this "phase" since middle school. Olivia is so likable and realistic consistently throughout the fic, not to mention you have a killer sense of humor writing her. As such, I am going to do something I almost never do and take the time to actually appreciate your impressive writing in a review. I hope you may potentially, please, porfavor, sil vous plait, onegaishimasu update again at some point! If you're not going to finish, I'd be (depressed, yes), but would love to know how you planned it to end.

Hola there!
I really love your story!
It has a realistic touch. You combine the Anime world with a real world, like the way Kumiko saw herself in the mirror, and everything that happened follows logic.
Another wonderful thing is Kumiko's character and the characterization for other characters, they are very person-like in my opinion, especially the academy teacher surprised me somehow~
The best thing is the orginality about your story, in my opinion: The setting is often used but how Kumiko gets into the world and that she tries (maybe even manages toprevent the massacre, the way Tobi appeares and their interaction is so very orginalI actually don't want to praise only but it is very hard for me to critise it because I love it the way it is- I've read it about 4 times now xD
Please continue your story, I want to know how it goes on, and
Thank you for writing it this far!

I'm really starting to hate those brats.
This fic is great though it's been nearly a year since you've updated.

Hey there! This is pretty good story you have going on here. Personally I like the cliché plot IF done well. And you are doing it pretty well. I think Olivia/Kumiko is a great and likeable OC, with lots of realism added to her. Self-doubt, bouts of selfishness, torn between doing what's right and just surviving, her emotional turmoils, not getting everything right on the first try and making plenty of mistakes. These things 'flesh out' a character, making them more realistic and interesting. More human. Also her almost sisterly affection with Naruto is the cutest. I love reading them interact. The plot is thickening what with what's going on with not only Itachi, Tobi, the Sandaime and Danzo on her case, but her academy teachers, Mebuki and the elder Ino-Shika-Cho on her case as well. Oh boy. Poor girl! Trouble just can't stop knocking on her door haha!

Anywho, keep it up! You're doing great and I want to know what happens next please! (Seriously *looks at last update, sweatdrops*) Have a good one :D

P.s. The omake's make me lol xD

great story! cant wait 4 the rewritten chapters and a update -

PLZZZ UPDATE