Good start

That was uncalled for. now I feel guilty

has anyone adopted the story yet?

Tra-ba-sum. I died

I loved this story please make more

In the Naruto anime they don't up and say it but the reason that human members look like each other busy practice in Clan marriage and the hyuga clan will never marry outside Their Own no matter what Naruto's last movie will tell you for every time there's a fanfiction that puts Naruto and Hinata I will leave these so people will have something to think about thank you

id like to adopt this

I would like to adopt the story please

A very funny farewell! Thank you for informing us readers. It's rare to read an apology. Glad to know your stories, if fewer, will be more focused. Thanks again!

Interesting...but wouldn't he be Namikaze Naruto? And I'm not sure Sarutobi would cry in front of people - he'd want to present a strong front. And chakra regenerates.

I do like the crowd being smart enough to ask questions. I mean, really, canon-citizens they never noticed the resemblance, or wondered what happened to the woman Minato had to be hanging out with (since they can't have never been seen together if they hung out enough to fall in love and get married) or whose baby it was?

with that agreement it would be hallarous if kyuubi could nake naruto temparaly steriale

Will naruto be reciving training in fuinjutsu?

pimpingest ever this is what should have been done in canon

Super first chapter...I love the plot and the writing is superb. I hope it goes NaruHina...I have seen a big dropoff for them together eventhough they are the MOST popular...and LEAST boring of all pairings.

Cool idea to have Naruto announced as the 4ths son...that should make a BIG difference in his entire life experience. I look forward to the story if it's NaruHina.

Not a bad start, will continue reading, but I wanted to point out something.

The Nine-tailed fox is not killed off as his chakra is fed into Naruto. The Nine-tailed fox's chakra is nearly limitless, and this is with his Yin chakra sealed away. Aside from that, chakra naturally regenerates. Meaning, with rest and time, chakra will restore itself. It's the reason why ninja in the show don't die from chakra exhaustion left and right. Once they run out, they just rest up for the remainder of the day and it's usually back by the following day so long as they didn't do anything extreme. My point is, the kyuubi has so much chakra that the small amount getting through the seal isn't enough to kill him off due to chakra exhaustion as it would no doubt be back before it even made a dent.

Just a thought.