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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I enjoyed it. .. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE KEEP WRITING MORE P/O YOU DO IT SO WELL. PS. Thankyou I loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw cute! i love that peter was there to take care of her |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a perfect one shot. I think you got the characters really well. It was wonderful to read something out of their everyday life kind of even if OlivIa hardly gets sick. I also loved your style of writing. It was easily to understand and it created a good atmosphere. I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww. This was good! I think you captured off duty P/O really well. For example, Olivia's little protests and Peter just carrying on. It's too bad she didn't remember Peter sooner in the season! I could see something like this happening while she was having her migraines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I can definitely see Olivia going on till the flu actually knocked her out completely...and yes he would be there to take care of her he is very good at that ...or would (or is it will)be given the chance. He's never told her he loves her at least only in her dream...I'd like to see it happen 'live'! I enjoyed this little peak into their lives, thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful! I loved every moment of it! I cannot wait to see what other fics you come up with! Thanks, ZeusFluff |