Reviews for Moonlight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story...*poke* write...more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() No offence, but this wasn't very good :( you really needed to put a little title every time there was a time skip. Plus, at the beginning I don't believe that's how the characters would act at all. |
![]() ![]() Aww, why didn't they keep him? :'( i actually understand why they did it. But it's still sad. Nice one. Maybe you should make it clear how much time has passed. |