Spider-Man flashbacks

Wow, I love this so much. It's written very nicely! Very awesome.

this made me cry i love this sooooo much

Almost made me cry at the end.

This is very emotional, and I love every word of it :) It's bein' favorited!

Cool

Wow. Wow, wow, wow, Leah.

I'll admit, there was a time I thought I had you pinned. I thought I knew your writing and that I could predict what you would do next. But this...this is incredible.

You went through a small lag period in the last year where your writing was drier. But this is phenomenal. You are back and you are screaming with words, and I am EATING IT UP. This is seriously so lovely. I had to sit back and take a deep breath after I read this. The phrasing is intense, the characters made you want to cry, the wording was proper..,

Sure, it's no amazing concept and there isn't any actual PLOT necessarily, but the sensory language and the MEANING behind it is so powerful. You somehow made Damian Wayne-one of the toughest characters I've ever run into-seem like a broken, tiny child. WITHOUT making him out-of-character. That's a huge feat. Gahh, I can honestly say I'm a little jealous. But not resentfully. Respectfully. You're incredible, my dear.

Alright, you've challenged me. I'm gonna work on my writings.