Reviews for Criticism
Zela Night chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
So Loki is not a fan of Twilight? I don't blame him, but why is he going to such extremes to destroy the place it is set in? Does he not know that he should be targeting the writer?
Hel chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
Ahhahahahhahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahah holy shite that's hilarious
Father of Understanding chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
Yeah! Start there! XD
Loki's Captain chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Well that was a pleasant but unexpected plot twist, haha. Great oneshot.
T. Alana M chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
LOL. He's gonna kill Edward!
Kalavel Loki chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
ohohooo, that really would show sparkly as what a real mithical creature is
OrangeflowerOJ chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Hahaha! XD i died laughing when i realized it was Twilight, Go Jor! Eat all the 'vampires'! :3
Ghost Rider of the Aragon chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Bloody brilliant! As a die-hard Twi-basher, that was awesome!
Duchess of Blueberries chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This story is brilliant
I admit, I did not count on THAT! XD
PhoenixRose3483 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Yes! Thank you for destroying forks. This just made my day.
AlyEb chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
oh my god, that was great! if only it was that easy
ParanoidSchizo91 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
I cackled maniacally at the last bit. I really cackled IRL loudly.
Here's hoping our heroes succeed in expunging the horror known as Twilight from the face of Midgard!
*cheers for Loki and Jor*
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I'm laughing so hard I'm crying... Best fic ever. XD
dglsprincess105 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
... did not see the ending coming. Sif's surprised me, but that also served to amuse me. Loki's need to destroy Forks "For the greater good" also made me snicker.

Wonder what Odin was thinking?

Smart of Loki to send Jormungandr! He probably feared that by sending Fenris, some mortal might ensnare him the way Bella ensnared Jacob.

I bet you Tony chose that movie because the Cullens reminded him of Loki, all that's missing is Loki sparkling.
My2BrownEyes chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Hahaha! I am definitely with Loki on this one. And I would hate for Earth to be judged by that.
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