It's very nice to hear how they're getting on after the traumatic events of Timeless, in my opinion, very OC if you consider that this has a different background from the original from Toboso. I have to mention this though coz for some reason I found it hilarious, You typed bondage when I think you meant bandage nothing too drastic I know but for some unknown reason (I'm sick minded) I peed myself at it. But I think it's more Grell's thing to be honest.
Anyway can't wait for the next spin off!

Aww this is really cute. Love it!

This one, despite being sad, was so fluffy and adorable! I can imagine Ronald just laying there with his head in William's lap and I go "SQUEEE SO ADORABLE!" :D

It's really heartbreaking that he's still suffering, but it's expected. In fact, I feel that he healed a lot quicker than most people would've in that situation - even if it weren't completely. :) Of course, we thank William and the idiots for that one! :D

Cool spinoff.

I really like it. I can understand Rons reaction. I dont like the dark and nothing had happened to me so he must be really terrified.

The characters arent ooc. You have another previous history than the manga, so their actions are reasonable, in my opinion.

I hope you write the other spinoff. Im looking forward to it. .

You know . . . I just realised that - as Kuroshitsuji - is *extremely* historically inaccurate, your reference to coffee makers is absolutely fine, especially considering lawnmowers and chainsaws never existed then either and it *is* the Shinigami we're talking about . . . XD So no worries!

I really liked the story. I thought it was extremely sweet and romantic, and I loved how platonic it was and how it focused on something deeper and more meaningful than just physical relations. It made me smile to hear about how Will would just hold him in bed and how they argue about the coffee, it made it feel really homely and domestic, a nice juxtaposition to the abuse in the earlier fic. It also wasn't as angsty as I imagined, so I'm glad that Ronald isn't being tortured by more abuse XD

They seem in character to me, especially how Will still has that little catty side to him when he still attacks Grell, lol. Ronald I think has every right to his little emotional outbursts, being that he is suffering from a serious trauma. They seemed real to the characters to me, and I loved reading more into their personalities and how they're getting on and developing.

There was only one or two small typos, but nothing major, and the writing itself was very good. It was a nice length, too, especially for a one-shot story and companion piece to the main story. I was surprised the lights came on by themselves though, wouldn't you have to go fix a fuse or flip an electrical switch to get the lighting back on?

The tension was built up very well, too :) I really did worry when poor Ronald didn't answer, and it was really quite gripping waiting to see what happened, learning as William learned little by little as to what went on.

So yeah, great job! Can't wait to see more from you :D

Aw. I loved Timeless and I really looked forward to your spinoff! So glad to see it, and I love it.