Reviews for Fist of the Shinobi
Lucio BetaBlake chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Hm...
SusanoosUltimateDefense chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
This is a great prologue, I was hooked the moment I started reading it, and it seems naruto lost all/ most of his chakra, that's good. Naruto with his chakra in these crossovers is just dumb and doesn't fit into the crossovers with history's strongest tenant. I do hope he can use the bare minimum like walk on water or the walls and karawimi, the rest should be pure martial arts. I do hope you put another chapter up, can't wait.
NocturneKoan chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Awesome prologue! This chapter has already got me hooked, I can't wait to see how Naruto will deal with the Kenichi-verse. Keep up the good work and update again soon!
Shattering chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
OK the storg is Great I hope you will continue this fanfic
Remzal Von Enili chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
from that part at the end you could also send sasuke to the kenichi world. just say that when juubi activated it's kumi it also dragged sasuke out of his area inbetween worlds.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Juubi sounds terrifying.
frytrix chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
I enjoy reading the story so far, and it was nice how you explained what happened at the end, this way we wont be seing any annoying flashbacks.

I looking forward to next chapter.
Jarjaxle chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
interesting plz update
evelsaint93 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Wonderful, I hope that the sealing would drain naruto of most of chakra, only allowing him to walk on water and climb on trees of that sort. Afterward everything would be pure taijutsu.
Orchamus chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Huh, well, I guess Naruto won't have much chakra then? Awesome if so, Naruto in HSD-verse with all his chakra abilities annoys me a bit.
Daicha chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I wonder where you are going to take this.
lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
This seems interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the good work.
Yoshi en Verde chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
I really like how this started. I hope you keep on writing this
Deadzepplin chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Well you have taken out the worst things that might have popped up later i am glad and I hope you continue this story
chm01 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
how old is naruto here?
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