This is sad, yes, but it also let's me be angry with John good taking love for granted. He just lost happiness.

The ending sentence was perfect.

It's heartbreaking

I offer you my bleeding, broken heart.

I don't want it anymore.

Please excuse me while I drown myself in tears.

I hate you.

I mean...I love you.

I don't know what I mean.

But please take it.

I don't want it anymore.

[In other words, please continue to write things in the future]

*cries herself to sleep* My heart is broken.

I just...words cant even describe how I feel write now. So emotional and tragic! O_O I'm to stunned to cry!

That was a beautiful story! The beginning was wonderful and hot and fantastically written! Then the ending was so sad! And emotional! I really loved the theme of the story and the personification of Sherlock especially.

Warning: Complete and utter fucking heartbreak

wow...i forgot for a minute this was only one chapter...make a sequel! please? :]

but really, that was just amazing.

OMFG. That was amazing. You are amazing. I've not read anything like it. WOW. A painfully beautiful piece, magnificently written. Thank you so much for sharing.

The story was awesome, but WHY DO YOU HATE APOSTROPHES SO MUCH? :'(

Ohgod.

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Something felt deep in his stomach when Sherlock thought of not seeing John again. Something like the fear he only ever experienced when in bed with John.

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That. Your use of "felt" as an intransitive verb, thought with disgust. Perfect and tragic and just... Looks like I've found a good writer to add to my list. :)

My heart. My heart! Oh my God it is breaking. I can't even... Just... Why?

Aw, this story is amazing. It made me cry like a baby, probably more than any other fic; it tore my heart into pieces and I love it so much.

There are some small mistakes and the end was a bit confusing, yet, it's beautiful. Also, the context was a bit difficult to get.

I sincerely wish there was another story like this. Maybe a continuation or an explanation of the whole situation that would clarify a bit more their relationship, but be sure: this Johnlock is going to my favourites now.

-crying-

TEAR OUT MY HEART WHY DON'T YOUUUUUU

this is beautiful and your prose is amazing and emotional and UGH.