is this abandoned? im really into it. ive read it 4 times.

please keep this story going

I've read this a couple of times now and while I love it, this story would be better without the Luna subplot.

I get that the author was going to bring them back together at some point, but right now it just breaks the flow and emotion of Harry and Sirius' stories. Luna being a seer is also a horrible cliche I hate so...

Can you please tell us if this story has died? Id very mutch like to know so that I can let this hope finally die.

hi ich würde mich freuen wenn du weiter schreibst deine geschichte hört sich interessant an und ich würde zu gerne wissen wie es weiter geht.

I truly enjoyed this story. I do hope that you will one day complete it. It is a lovely premise and I can easily picture what Sirius looks like from your descriptions. I like that you are incorporating Luna into the story, and with the end of the most recent chapter, I'm certain that her dream from earlier in the doc is going to come true. Thank you for mentioning that you had been writing the story on your phone. It explained a lot of the out of place words and "misspellings" in the earlier chapters and I was able to continue reading without becoming overly aggravated but the autocorrect substitutions. It is a testament to how appealing the plotline and characterization is to me that it didn't make me stop reading.

Please do come back to this tale when life allows you to do so. I will be eagerly watching for any future updates.

Great story hope you update

It was by pure chance I found this fic, gotta say it's amazing

Love to read more of this, if you ever come back. The first chapters were rough, but the fic got better with time. Interesting plot, regardless.

I hope grad school worked out for you and you're doing well. Any plans to update this story?

more plese I cant wait!

I read this story last night and absolutely loved it! You do such a great job of keeping the characters in character. Even more than that, I like that you seem to have an over-arching goal and outline for the story, rather than just dropping Harry and Sirius into Temeraire's world and seeing what happens.

I think Sirius' accepting and then choosing his dragon side is very well done. I am also very glad that he didn't invent his own breed of dragon, but rather re-awoke one he already had a connection with. Some people might say that makes him more of a "mary sue" but I think it shows good writing and planning.

I also like that they are getting extra "secret" training. They're going to see battle soon, and the more training they get the better they can defend themselves. It's much better writing than if they were both just naturally amazing. I am eagerly anticipating the first real fight, when they can shock the Corp at how much they know "on their own."

I am also very glad that you put so much thought into the Corp's response to Harry. I think the scenes from their perspective are even more fun than the ones from Harry or Sirius.

I do have two small questions: why choose to have Ron betray Harry, and why choose to have the Dursleys be so physically abusive they leave multiple scars?

Ron first: I know this is fourth year, so if there was ever a time when Ron would betray Harry it would be now. Fourth year was tough on Ron, but I felt like he grew up a lot during it and by the end he was much closer to being a mature adult. Is there a reasoning behind Ron believing the worst of Harry?

As for the Dursleys, I was really glad when you said that they beat him *after* being told he couldn't defend himself and that he'd killed someone, supposedly "confirming" what "they always knew about him." When his back is revealed to the doctor, however, you say that he has years of scars. This seems out of line with canon. Is there a specific reason you chose to change this?

great story its awesome

this story is kinda old so im not sure if you will care or not but just in case you have a bit of a continuity error in this chapter "The boy had wormed his way into his heart the second James had placed him in his arms just minutes after his birth" but in chapter two you had said "(...)I have loved you since the first time I held you. Your father had fainted so I got to hold you first(...)" so james wouldn't have been able to hand him to sirius.

Good blend of the two stories. Minor issue of the time line since, are you doing a 4:1 ratio, Harry to Hogwarts?

Minor spelling/grammer issues, more like spell check errors, or data storage/tranferance.

More please.