I'm usually not one for leaving negative reviews...
But this story started bad and it it just kept getting worse...
I get that you wanted to make the OC a bit awkward and not a people-person... but she just ended up being a bit... slow? [ so I won't have to say 'stupid'... oh, oops ]
And Ria? Really? You could've gone with Alex, Lex, Al, whatever...
But you chose Ria... Ria & Rin... Why?
The writing wasn't that good either... I don't know how I managed to read so much of it.
The memory loss was the killing blow, helped by the prospect of her being pregnant.
At least for me, this was not my cup of tea.
*Hugs*

What happened to the story? It began really good and then it just didn't make sense. Should have kept it the way it was. It was more interesting. Now it's all confusing.

The amount of emotion she has its almost nonexistant.
if it was a normal person he or she would probably hesitate before following someone that way and wonder in wich type of world are they living in .-.

well but thats how you wanted her personality to be

In a previous chapter, Lord Yukimura was the lord of the north, in this chapter he's the lord of the east.

...did you forget that she has a broken rib from the previous chapter? She shouldn't move around so easily. Or at least the others would have mentioned this to her since Sesshomaru witnessed/heard a rib crack.

I really like your plot so far.
I have noticed in this chapter particularly you started with Llyod, and I had no idea who this was and then you switched to Yukito. If you can, please fix this. It was really confusing to read.

On another note, I find that you've improved some. But, in previous chapters, though you say Alexandria's POV or Sesshomaru's POV, there are times when it is purely first person POV and it jumps to third person POV. I'm sure I'm not confused with the few times Sesshomaru addresses himself in third person, but I'm sure if you reread some chapters you'll find what I'm talking about.

Other than these, I'm looking forward to the rest of your story.

Really enjoyed this story. It was awesome!

Please post the last chapter to this great story please, they deserve to be together.

Wow i really love this story please write more chapters or u can make a sequel to this story.

plz hurry u have done a wonderfull job with this story so far it is amazing and fantastic i hope the ending will be just as amazing as the beginning plz hurry with your next chapter

I dont know why but the indiana jones them poped into mind at that last paragraph

Can't wait for the next one!

Your a sentences are way too plain and short. Work on it. It is very cheesy how your oc just meets sesshoumaru's group and she "sounds like him" because she said "hm" ...

I would rather avoid writing a fanfiction story in the first person. It just looks like a shameless input of yourself. Anyways, good luck, the most important thing is for you to enjoy it.

Teehee they kissed :-) :-) :-)

I bet the deal was to make her his wife and protect her. That sends like a Kagome thing and sesshy already planned to do that .
trisana